9:00 am, after a fun night at the bowling alley for a tournament, I walk down the street to my shop. I get there, ready to unlock the door, 2 times, and start my day. Then, I realize that the window is smashed open and glass covers a good portion of the sidewalk.
Looking at my burglarized shop, the reality is that all my baked goods are destroyed, and the cash register is emptied out. The good part is that I emptied and took the money in the cash register to the bank a couple days ago since I knew there was a lot of snow predicted to come, so there wasn’t too much money that I lost.
I was determined not to loose too much, since a lot of the time, it seems like I lost my childhood.
Hey mentioned your shop in a post. Nothing you need to respond to just thought you should know.
ReplyDeleteI like how you give some backstory and explanation to your OCD. I will say, it sounds a tad bit forced, but it's there, so that as good. I want to know more about your characters parents. There seems to be some good conflict going on, so you should write about that.
ReplyDeleteI like the introduction of back story. I'd love for you to expand on it more as you write more. I want to read more.
ReplyDeleteLet's meet at a fire in the park off Shellac avenue
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